Monday, October 26, 2015

Library Day_Monday Oct.26

Hello class,

Greetings! Hope your week is starting off well!

This is just a friendly reminder about our class tonight. It's the "Library Day", and we will be meeting in theMarshall Gallery in the main Library at 6:30pm, which is located just inside the East Doors of the main library (undergrad library side). 

If any of you prefer going together as a chunk from our regular classroom (FLB G3), please show up at our classroom at 6:25pm. I will be there, and we can walk to the main library together.

Please note that you are required to attend tonight's "library day" class, and your attendance will be checked as usual.

Please let me know if you have any questions!

See you tonight,
Yilan

Wednesday, October 21, 2015

3.2 Critical thinking: identification of critique points

Outline of this lesson



  • Understand the components and format of a summary-critique essay

  • State your own positions in response to an academic source (Article: Beauty Sleep) following the format of a summary-critique essay


  • Survey

    How to write a critique



    A. Evaluating sources

    ppt for this lesson

    • the source itself
    • the evidence
    • the arguments made by the author 
    • bias or not


    These apply to:
    The article that you will write critique on.
    Outside sources: whether you can use them as illustrations/ examples for your paper.



    B. Fun read

    What do you think of this passage? Is it reliable? Would you use it for your paper or not?

    Researchers: Quality of sleep may be affected by abandoning family in 1994 



    C. Structure of a research paper 

    IMRD=?



    D. Critique points from the article: Beauty Sleep

    Work in pairs here



    Monday, October 19, 2015

    3.1 Introduction to critique

    Outline of this lesson
    • Understand the difference between a critique and simple criticism
    • Understand the parts and structure of an academic critique
    • Identify the parts of an academic critique
    • Outline an academic critique

    A. Warm-up

    Let's come up with some everyday critiques around us



    B. Critique 

    Click here to view the exercise: are these critiques or not? Why or why not?

    A critique does not always only contradict or disagree with something


    C. Summary-critique essay

    Structure:

    • Introduction
    • 3 Body paragraphs
    • Conclusion and references (if any)

    Which part of your summary-critique essay do the following items belong to?

    1. evaluation of the source material
    2. introduce the source
    3. points of critique
    4. summarize the source
    5. recommendation for improvement
    6. summary of points of critique
    7. thesis statement

    Summary Critique video #1
    Summary Critique video #2

    3.0 Critique Overview

    Review ppt for Unit 2 lessons and assignments


    Student Outcomes:

    As a result of this unit and assignment, students will be able to: 
    • Summarize a study in an introduction using neutral reporting language. 
    • Evaluate research validity through critically analyzing study premise, methods, design, subjects, and claims. 
    • Organize both + and - critique points into coherent body paragraphs that support the overall assessment of the study. 
    • Use academic evaluative language to critique parts of research with appropriate tone and strength 

    Assignment Description:

    Students will read an article (one article for the whole class, see below), and write a summary-critique paper, working as a class to come up with critique points to include. The summary-critique paper will consist of an introduction and summary of the article, 3 critique points with examples from the text, and a conclusion. Outside sources may be used, such as the sample critique article provided, but not required.


    Assignment Prompt & Grading Rubric:

    Please click here to view


    Article: Beauty Sleep 
    Comprehension questions (due: 10/28 before class: 6:30pm, submit it on compass2g)



    Wednesday, October 14, 2015

    2.4 Peer Perception

    Outline of this lesson:


    • Understand the goals of peer review.
    • Provide "perception" feedback for peers regarding needed components for assignment
      • what to comment in your peer's paper
      • what constitutes effective/helpful feedback
    • Receive "perception" feedback from your peer, and improve your own writing through reflection and analysis.
    Ppt for this lesson

    A. Discussions about peer review


    • Do you like other people to read your work? Why/ why not?
    • Have you ever had a peer review before? (if so, did you like it or not? why?)

    B. Goals of a peer review 


    C. Sample comments activity

    1. Read the comments that you received 

    • How do these comments make you feel?
    • Do you think these comments will be helpful for you to revise your essay? Why/ why not?

    2. Helpful comments: criteria & P-Q-P method

    3. Fix the sample comments using P-Q-P method




    D. Sample Peer Comments

    click here to view


    E. Provide feedback for your peer

    use this Synthesis peer review sheet


    F. Homework

    1. Please finish writing synthesis essay feedback for you peer.
    2. Please revise your own synthesis essay based on the feedback from your peer.
    3. Please submit the 1st draft of your synthesis essay (compass2g website) by 11:59pm this Friday, 2015/10/16


    Monday, October 5, 2015

    2.3 Identifying and Synthesizing main ideas

    Outline of this lesson

    • understand the concept of "synthesis" in academic writing
    • use a synthesis chart/table to organize ideas from three sources and identify similarities and differences between the sources
    • transform information on synthesis chart into three coherent paragraphs that contain all of the integrated sources

    Here's the Ppt for this lesson


    A. About source synthesis 


    1. Meaning of synthesis: to combine separate elements in order to form a whole.



    2. What is a synthesis chart/table?

    When we create a synthesis chart, we take several works and compare them, marking their similarities in order to see the whole picture.

    e.g. Let's compare: Lord of the Rings V.S. Matrix V.S. Harry Potter I

    • How can we compare these three movies to each other?
    • What topics can we use to compare? Think of few perspectives for comparison.

    Types of Synthesis: 

    • Compare & contrast an idea
    • Definition of a term/ concept
    • Support a claim 


    3. How to make a source-synthesis chart for academic essays?

    • Make a list of what perspectives that you want to compare in terms of all three articles. 
    • Choose 3 perspectives that you believe are the most relevant to the broader topic of the three articles. 
    • After filling in your points, make notes of how each article relates to the other two articles in terms of each perspective.


    4. Practice making a source-synthesis chart

    Topic: Computer-Assisted Language Learning (CALL)

    Quick questions:
    • Have you ever used computer/internet resources to learn a new language?
    • How was the experience? 
    • What do you like most about it? 
    • Would you recommend CALL?

    source #1
    article 1: The impact of computer-assisted language learning in teaching vocabulary

    source #2
    article 2: Teaching reading through computer-assisted language learning

    source #3
    article 3: The role of computer-assisted language learning (CALL) in promoting learner autonomy


    source-synthesis chart 




    B. Three articles about animal testing: Comprehension






    Comprehensive Questions 

    • How do people respond to animal testing? What are some reasons for their positions?
    • Is there another way to replace animal testing?
    • What limitations do traditional animal testing have?


    Article #2: The Price of Killing Off Animal Testing (for practice)


    Comprehensive Questions


    • What does the situation of animal testing look like in our community ?
    • How are researchers trying to minimize the ethical issue that animal testing brings about?
    • What are the costs of killing off animal testing?


    Article #3: Avoiding Animal Testing (for practice)

    Comprehensive Questions 


    • What is the vision of US National Academy of Sciences? 
    • Are there any potential technologies that can replace animal testing? Do they have any weaknesses?
    • How does the situation of animal testing look like compared to that of the mid 70s?
    • What are some advantages of non-animal testing methods?


    C. Three articles about animal testing: Source-Synthesizing Table


    • Work in groups of 3 for 10 minutes
    • Each group please come up with 1 perspective/ topic that is discussed in the three articles about animal testing
    • Use this Synthesis Table - Animal Testing (Blank). Fill in the table with information from the three articles about this perspective/ topic



    D. Creating coherent paragraphs from your synthesis table




    E. How to synthesize 




    • three ways to synthesize sources
      • similarity
      • contrast
      • accumulation
    • synthesis structures
      • introduction
      • body paragraphs
      • conclusion
    • some reminders



    F. Homework 


    Based on the three articles about animal testing, and based on what we learned in this lesson,
    1) complete your own source-synthesis table, 
    2) complete the first draft of your synthesis essay before next class, and 
    3) bring it to class on Wednesday.

    We will do peer perception during our class next time, so it is very important that you are well prepared.